Saturday, 18 February 2017

Omaru Creek - by Sonnia

First of all we had walked with a buddy to the Omaru creek in our literacy line.
It was so smelly  that I had to block my nose with my t-shirt and I couldn't breath properly. We had to kneel down and have a look at the sewage water it looked very disgusting and had a dark blue black color. Later on we had got up and had a little tiny walk. We had got in our line in our two buddies and walked back. My buddy was Zamera.


  1. This comment has been removed by the author.

  2. Hi Sonnia. I'm Lydia from room 7 at Tamaki Primary school.
    I really loved your description about the Omaru creek. I liked the way you added lots of detail about how it smelt, how the water looked like, and what use done. Keep up the great work!


  3. hi Pt England like how wrote a description.Nice job keep it up.